#1: we see the backs of the snowmen, so I might avoid this one.
#3 is interesting POV, it showcases the melted snowman, but you don't see the expressions of the surrounding characters, which I think is important to sell the drams of this story.
#2 (right middle sketch) - I think it's important to show the morgue to play up that whole forensic CSI story. If you modify your #2, that might be your strongest and here's why: We can see the faces of your three characters (Policeman, maybe make the second character a mortician, and the relative.) You could move the relative to center, and raise the camera angle so it's more of a 3/4 birds eye view. This might give you the best angle to show the expressions on the faces of the snow people in an over the top and humorous way. See sketches above)
I like what you did with the melted snowman in your #'s 1 and 3. Funny! Maybe combine a slightly altered composition of #2 (3/4 birds eye), add a morgue "drawer," and the melted snowman of #3.
Also consider the environment. Are they inside? Outside? I will let you decide. (See sketches above)
#1: we see the backs of the snowmen, so I might avoid this one.
ReplyDelete#3 is interesting POV, it showcases the melted snowman, but you don't see the expressions of the surrounding characters, which I think is important to sell the drams of this story.
#2 (right middle sketch) - I think it's important to show the morgue to play up that whole forensic CSI story. If you modify your #2, that might be your strongest and here's why: We can see the faces of your three characters (Policeman, maybe make the second character a mortician, and the relative.) You could move the relative to center, and raise the camera angle so it's more of a 3/4 birds eye view. This might give you the best angle to show the expressions on the faces of the snow people in an over the top and humorous way. See sketches above)
I like what you did with the melted snowman in your #'s 1 and 3. Funny! Maybe combine a slightly altered composition of #2 (3/4 birds eye), add a morgue "drawer," and the melted snowman of #3.
Also consider the environment. Are they inside? Outside? I will let you decide. (See sketches above)